Brown and staid, so handsomely made
Any inhibitions; I have now betrayed
To you I come with bated breath,
so unleash my passion and be my meth!
Searching eyes search your pack,
now there is no turning back.
Warm and wet you melt in me
unknowingly setting my soul free
Your sweetness so heightens my drive,
and the darkness makes me so alive.
Having you is not my sin
why does the voice then differ within?
You’ll go back to never come,
leaving me behind, comfortably numb.
I have fallen again for the bait.
just who on earth made CHOCOLATE??
Any inhibitions; I have now betrayed
To you I come with bated breath,
so unleash my passion and be my meth!
Searching eyes search your pack,
now there is no turning back.
Warm and wet you melt in me
unknowingly setting my soul free
Your sweetness so heightens my drive,
and the darkness makes me so alive.
Having you is not my sin
why does the voice then differ within?
You’ll go back to never come,
leaving me behind, comfortably numb.
I have fallen again for the bait.
just who on earth made CHOCOLATE??
Awesome! I like the way the suspense breaks in the last line.
ReplyDeleteVery Clever! Way to go! :D
Terrific. At last I have found someone who believes in rhyme/meter (blank verses are just that - blank). It's very O'Henryish -with a twist in the tale.
ReplyDeleteBait
ReplyDeleteChocolate
These 2 words rhyme....but only in a Gujarati accent ;)
wonderful poem :D kudos to you
- D'puk
thanx everyone...and abt the bait-choc...thingy, well lets just say i took a poetic liberty!
ReplyDeleteneways, keep reading!